Zane has a complete plan set for his essay, and now, a strong body paragraph which will set as an example for his other paragraphs. Zane is also improving in Maths as he is doing questions be could not previously do before.

Zane must do more questions and revisit the worked-out solutions to his mistakes in order to make less silly mistakes.

Sebastian has learnt how to structure his responses to questions better. He now directly addresses the questions and provides examples. Moreover, Sebastian was able to do worded math questions involving addition, subtraction, and multiplication in his head quite easily.

Sebastian needs to improve in worded questions that involve division.

After showing Zane some of my exemplar economics essay structures, Zane was made aware of what a 20/20 economics essay requires.

Zane must prepare for his upcoming Maths assessment task by focusing on HSC questions under timed conditions. He must also check the worked-out solutions and keep track of his mistakes.

Zane was checking his mistakes and analysing the working out.

Zane struggled with most financial questions, however gradually stopped making the same silly mistakes.